- There are no bookmarks, which would be a useful feature of the PDF even though it's only shortish
Huh, there are bookmarks?
- The disclaimer is written in quite informal language, perhaps some of it should be made slightly more formal? (ripping off is a bit ambiguous) I'm not saying write it in legal English though. What do other people think?
Yeah perhaps it should, was just a bit bored when writing that part so I ended up writing something random. If you want to reword it, feel free. Could attempt something on my own as well but my English isn't perfect so I'm sure you could do it better.
- Installation: "...the changes that this patch does": I don't like the "does". What about "...the changes that this patch makes to the game"?
Sounds better, yeah.
- Overview: "All this and more gets explained throughout in the new and improved tutorial": I don't think throughout is the correct word. Shouldn't it be thoroughly or something?
Yeah it should definitely be thoroughly, didn't know how to spell it (spellt it throughoutly and word complained it being a non-exsitant word hence messing up and forgetting to correct it :oops: )
- The links in FAQ should be made into blue clickable links.
The website links? Well I tried to make it look like a book and generally website links are not links in books, but if it's better than way perhaps I could reconsider.
I don't think the big change log is a problem. If you have bookmarks then people will be able to skip past it easily. Still, that's just my opinion.
Yeah the problem was mainly that I doubt someone is going to read 20 pages of changes even if they're slightly interested and cutting it down would make it easier to read.
Another thing not about the readme: I was just thinking: What will happen if someone tries to install the patch over a version of the game that has already been patched to 1.6? If you do this with the betas then I think it might have caused some issues with music files being updated and such.
Well the plan is that you will be installing it on a fresh copy or on 1.58 SR2, not on a previous beta of the patch as ensuring compability with all the different betas is just asking for trouble and takes too much time compared to what it gives.