Well I only watched the map from the screenshot also, but I can see on this picture already that this map lacks details. That´s really important for a nice looking map,to invest more times to place more terrain details and random objects. For example at top left corner of that picture is a big place, where you used like just one type of terrain
Btw you should think which kind of map you want. Like that it will be really a campy map, because the ""bridges"" are really small, so players can easily defend their positions at this place.
However good job, just try to find more time for that map
