Hi Harry,
I guess not as bad map fist time.
I would recommend few things:
-Coalfields. I guess too random and not really smothie.
-few river's and hill's edges are too straight.(sharp)
-I know t is Eden (Éden) but probably using lots of objects at some places. Can be annoying.
-personally i dislike the rndom Earthquake tiles.
-Few of your hill could be more smother not as like the hot water-boiling.
-on few locations used the uncuttable trees where players would use the woodcutters.
These are tiny things and easy to fix.
Anyway I found lots of cool things as like the waterfalls and the pine trees usage what is very rarely. The bridge what you made on the left is too perfect. Category A+. Are you an arhitech?
So shortly:
Coalfields, uncuttable trees, elevations.
Once again good map at first time!
t