- instruments sound too unnatural/digitized, perhaps you could use another samples and maybe add a small reverb, so far it sounds more like Sci-Fi music (esp. at 1:37)
- where's bass drum?
- music end is strange
DeepBlue.mid sounds more finished and complete yet
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